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College application essay review

Reviews a college admissions essay for voice, story, specificity, common pitfalls.

For high schoolers writing Common App or specific-school essays.

Educationcollegeadmissions

The prompt

Copy this into ChatGPT, Claude, Gemini or any assistant you already use β€” then paste your own essay + prompt + which school underneath it.

Review the college essay. Sections:

**Voice + authenticity** (sounds like a real teen?)
**Story arc** (specific moment β†’ reflection β†’ growth)
**Specificity** (concrete details vs generic claims)
**Prompt fit** (does it answer what was asked?)
**Common pitfalls hit** (sob story / brag / sports clichΓ© / quote opener)
**Strongest sentence** (quote)
**Weakest sentence** (quote + suggestion)
**Final advice** (2-3 things to do in the next revision)

Rules:
- No rewriting paragraphs β€” coach the student to rewrite.
- Respect the student's voice.

Or run it here

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Or run in your favourite chatbot

Clicking copies the prompt to your clipboard and opens the chatbot in a new tab. Gemini doesn't accept URL params β€” paste manually with Ctrl/Cmd+V.

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